can’t wait to see where this goes.

well I decided to just tell the backstory here, and it had to be something BIG, but accidental. And yet it had to include my spy skills from Ficlets.. hee hee.

Quite the monologue there. Interesting stuff, but I think it could have done with a bit of breaking, a pause, a sigh, something to show how she is doing while retelling all these sad details.

good idea, i wonder how many characters i have left..

Well Elsha you have done a good job. The only part I keep returning to is the sentence about ’ I chatted to Joe,Alex and Chris that I had to go now and signed off.’ I removed 2 excess ands, but look at the sentence structure it does not read properly