wow this was stylistic and elegent i loved it.

It was all really cool and awesome until “I did that…. huh..”
OMIT :D
oh and welcome to Ficly

Neat.

A bit too stylized for my taste. The parentheses didn’t really seem to do anything, even on repeated readings.

Ditto on the welcoming of course. Thanks for joining us. I’m fairly new too.

reminds me of a few songs.. I like how the person kind of slips into a dream at the end.
The parenthesis are not needed, and have some confidence! You did it!
Welcome to Ficly.

You do a lot of things. I was with it right up until the ending bit.

i think i might have found what beagle was missing in the parentheses… but i won’t spoil it. I really like the personal style, very original.

very nice!