wow that was a thriller! great job! My brother must have been charmed by the bounty, the turncoat. Why? WHY?!
Now, anyone got a time machine??lol

A bit uneven in places, but I really like the whole turn, unturn, warning, and proof of said warning’s validity.

Hey OOPS. (sounds as if I made a mistake.he,he,) This was genuinely tongue in cheek /Micky Spillane. I especially like how you teach people life lessons. By the way do I know you? You seem to have me down pat. lol

Hi Marli, Glad you liked it. Hey it’s a small world in the writing community, chances are we’ve passed somewhere along the line. :)

S.J.