I loved the end sentence, very thought provoking. There were a few run-on sentences, and and the sentences seemed a bit disjointed because you hit a return at the end of each sentence rather than writing it as a paragraph. BTW, welcome to ficlets and before Mighty Joe Youngs says it…Get a pic!
I loved the end sentence, very thought provoking.
There were a few run-on sentences, and and the sentences seemed a bit disjointed because you hit a return at the end of each sentence rather than writing it as a paragraph.
BTW, welcome to ficlets and before Mighty Joe Youngs says it…Get a pic!
This story was deep. it had my little brain spinning. Oh yeah and get a pic.
Krulltar 
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