Whoops! Maybe a little too complete…

Nice twist. :)

Nobody could say he didn’t do his job, though it does make me wonder how well they product tested these things before going to sale LOL

I love the detail of the captain being female. Good Sci-fi has always encouraged gender neutralness.

Now, about you story. Well written, and great twist ending.

Man! I thought this was about me!
But I like it, and I like how it’s pronounced Muffle. I like that word/name.

Yeah i thought it was about, muffy, but this is a real nice piece. i liked it.
Rabbit i am lookingf forward to seeing more of your stuff.