Aw, man an intellectual challenge! Yea! Very nice, very nice indeed. Will have to think of a sequel to this one. :)

Technically can’t see anything wrong, except when I read it, it kinda jars between sentences because you start so many with He or The. This gives it an interesting effect, not sure if was intended or not.

Nice piece.

S.J.

I have to admit that when I read this I leaned back and said “who the f is leon, and where’s the stupid diamond”. Luckily my Muse of Quirkiness hit me with a clue bat before I read it again. So…Brilliant!

It was the title of SJ’s story that got me thinking. I wanted to give him the credit due him for starting the thought process. Hence the sequal. To bad I didn’t have enough room to do the bacon, fried onions and hash browns.

Yes, sequels are not just additons to a story, but can be continuation on themes, or just loose configurations of ideas. Ficly is assume that way.
I would have loved to have seen the eggs go back in the chickens :)

just as long as he doesn’t have to go back to the restroom….

S.J.

my kids think watching a reminding video is the most hilarious thing in the world, so you would win bonus points from them!