seems an important job, though hard to envision the world between worlds.. i think my brain is smoking..

Fascinating tale going through all four of them, certainly intriguing enough to make you want to read more.

You might want to tidy up the sentences a little though, some grammar work and some occasions where you could knock a fifteen word sentence down to eight or nine. Words are lazy, make ’em work for every penny I say.

Were you planning to sequel or to wait for someone else to sequel?

S.j.

@s.j. Go for it . I am in a flux at present but would like the last one to actually start a new theme. Marli

this is really cool marli i like the wierd psychedilc feel to it.

Very, very strange. Gotta love the Alice reference. Seemed a bit short and rambling though. Not sure what the fix would be though.