Metaphorically this is Beautiful. And if it is more than fiction, it is truely wonderful.
It’s all true.
This is really amazing, I love the metaphors and the story, and pretty much everything about this is awesome.
wow. amazing.
Lovely, magical way of telling the story. Really effective use of the ghost/death metaphor throughout.
Thanks so much for the input, THX. I have decided to lengthen this one to about 3000 words for a women’s literary competition in February.
This is truly epic. I also love that it is a true story.
Good luck in the competition!
@ science Thanks for the encouragement .
This is brilliant. Truly Beautiful. I love it.
Thanks, Lady V. Been a busy summer or I would have said so sooner.
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