This is a nice story, it seems like it has more words than i get. Well i guess it only seems that way.
Welcome to ficly or welcome back i should say.

wow, he needs a shower!
this is a great piece about regret, anger and disappointment. I half expect him to cry, or break down in some other way.

Thanks, guys!

I read it a second time and this is really awesome. I love the way he is almost haunted by her memory. That is how it really feels.

Very nicely phrased, I kinda saw the end coming but that didn’t detract from the story at all which is excellent.

S.J.

Well. I should start writing on my cellphone more often. Thanks so much.