i love how dad went to Markie, or the captor put them together so he wouldn’t have any more runaways. Clever thinking.
now I hope the FBI makes it down there, before Markie has to witness his brother’s shooting..

wait why is he questioning the last phrase? it should be a statement. he said it not questioningly, but…seriously, determinedly,
oh and who is saying it? it almost sounds like you meant that line to be from the captor…

Hmm ok, let me fix it up, thanks!

k, now that’s what i thought you meant!