hood? i thought they left their jacket, must be a hoodie, we don’t know what they are wearing, or how old they are, or even what sex they are… nice job with the flashback, I love how you save it for now, the person has parents, and a doctor with bad news, all while stepping up on the ledge. This just goes on and on, doesn’t it?

i liked how he could see their mouths moving but heard no sound.