Bravo

Oh my word! this is best piece of writing ever

Looks like you have a fanbase already!

This was a very odd story that had a few errors, but had a good goofy tone about it.

BTW, Welcome to Ficly.

The arts of sentence structure and transition still elude me… Thanks for the comments fellows!

well you fulfilled the requirements..
it was entertaining..
but it was also a ‘what just happened??’ moment. the cabbage and christmas thing.. i’m so out of this loop..

The only explanation I can provide is that I love non-sequiturs.

this story has definately wierded me out.

Cute, very countrified.

S.J.

This is by far the best thing ever.

FIVE PENCILS YOU BRILLIANT, CRAZY BASTARD.