Very skillfully done, and most interesting, writing from the pov of a needle…
Good job and thanks for entering!!! I like the word “weft” I’ll have to remember that…
Great description of the movement of the needle through the cloth. Using the words “surge” and “glorious” really captures the sense of satisfaction and fulfillment the needle feels.
I’m sorry I didn’t see this story sooner. My favorite line is “my tail, a streak of brilliant red behind me” to describe the thread.
I love the idea of the needle ‘nuzzling’ aside the threads. You manage to capture a personality very concisely. Well done!
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