ending it.. well i COULD write a ‘how the family now functions in the light of recent events’ piece, but I’m not sure what that would be.
I was thinking, the mothers final thoughts about the incident as she’s finally seeing her son and family? I left the ending up to you if you wanted it :D
okay, it kind of led there.. :) I just was unsure.
I liked the first half better than the second half. Didn’t follow as well the last bits.