and we sat there in the night time dark
exchanging tragedies like a midnight lark
each one a solemn, quiet remark
of a journey we both have yet to embark…

iloveit.

OH I AGREE WITH FISHY LOVED IT.

forgot to rate

great poem too fish!
i like the hug at the end!
who said “got a funny way of showing it”? just a little confused there..

It’s in the line where Madii spoke, so it’s Madii saying it.

yeah, i guessed that, just find it a little odd that she answered it like that.. maybe it’s just me!

I have to agree with Elsha, needs something like “He’s just” in front of the “got a funny way” to indicate a continuation of her speech.

Plus I wasn’t really sure who said what in the last two quotes, though it really could have worked both ways.

Otherwise not a bad little piece overall.

S.J.