Whoah, this could go into an entire series, with this whole kidnapping being just the begin. I’ll ponder about this more in a bit!

Great, Great Job! Great working with you to the end of this but possibly the start of something else :D

well have at it!.. it has been fun! and this level of hostage thing is new for me, so it was quite the exercise! i did write about a kidnapped girl before on ficlets, but it wasn’t this violent.

Cool ending, and I like the closure to that bit I read oh-so-long ago about the pain of leaving during the course of the disaster.

yeah, it was all apart of her change, ultimately, so i had to throw it back in.

Wow, can’t believe that’s the end of it. But a very good story overall. Thanks for keeping e entertained during my boring lunch break at college!