A little bit creepy actually, though good… I don’t know whether it feels a little too fast, put perhaps that reflects the ‘live fast, die young’ thing you’ve got going on here… Either way, enlightening, and nice to see a prequel in the challenge as well :)

Doesn’t really seem to move too fast for me, it seems to fit in really with the kind of story you’re telling. Could have possibly made a bit more of his life after Rose’s death but that might also have made the whole thing a lot more interesting and much more sequellable.

Pretty good, attempt at the challenge.

S.J.

it amazes me how people do things to be noticed….and when the right person notices, their world totally changes; sometimes for naught. That is how I saw this story and perhaps it isn’t just a story; it may be a real person’s life story. Good job!

Well written and the plot is good. Goes to show anyone can turn their life around and around.

Laughed out loud at the ‘lounge lizard’s Evil Knievel’ line. Absolutely awesome level of both absurdity and tragedy. It was like watching an ‘E True Hollywood Story’ in 5 minutes.