Quite a soft ending, I was hoping for some ba-zaz.

yeah i went soft. ;P this was a crappy piece. I just had the idea and tried it, but didn’t like it. HEY maybe i should title it “Fix This Ficly!”

the dialog alone was well worth the read, even though it has effeminate clowns handing out money. I truely despise clowns. loathe. hate. strongly dislike to the point of beating them down, putting their feet in concrete and letting them swim with the fishies. The only way to “Fix This Ficly!” would be to kill the clowns.
Seriously, I hate clowns. Anywho, this had a “pettycoat junction” humor about it…very light hearted and fun.

he never actually saw the clown, just the balloons..

he thought the balloons, if he carried them around, being pink and yellow, would make HIM look gay..

I love the tone of this piece. Great job with capturing the dialect in your dialogue. The realization at the end brings it all back down to earth and seems to humanize the whole situation. Awesome.

Hobos using big words…

The world isn’t so illiterate after all…