Last sentence totally make this. Im new at ficly haha so sorry if my comments suck. Im not sure what else to say! <3
Interesting…. Specials? Good writing. :)
This defintely needs some breaking up. Especially when it comes to the dialouge. It gets rather difficult to read in some parts. Over all, it’s a fairly captivating story. ..Reading on.
Something tells me that that word, “specials”, is used here with extreme contempt.