Last sentence totally make this.
Im new at ficly haha so sorry if my comments suck. Im not sure what else to say! <3

Interesting…. Specials? Good writing. :)

This defintely needs some breaking up.
Especially when it comes to the dialouge. It gets rather difficult to read in some parts.
Over all, it’s a fairly captivating story.
..Reading on.

Something tells me that that word, “specials”, is used here with extreme contempt.