April sent me a ‘Creative Inspiration’ on facebook a while ago, and I finally got around to using it. It was a picture of a kitchen with the challenge to write about some strange situation in such a place using all five senses. Thanks for the inspiration, April.

Good sensual imagery and erotic overtone. One edit though… "He couldn’t help but laugh at a soul so old giddy as a school girl.“… it needs an edit to clarify.

The only thing I could really suggest is the sentence that Krulltar pointed out that could use some clarification. But other than that I really liked this most unusual piece.