This felt like a great start to a Matlock type of series…

whoa whoa whoa, she killed him?!
oh dear, I def. hope there’s more to this…

There’s definitely more lol I plan on writing it as sort of a mini-series until the detectives working the cold cases solve the murder.

ooooh okie dokes =) can’t wait.

nice dialogue. reading more

Damnn. She got what was coming. Loved Anthony’s strong character.

I love the line, “Maybe I don’t want what every other guy’s already had." It’s clicheed, but in a really, really good way — fits perfectly into your story. Not that your story is cliche. It’s not. Ugh, I’m complimenting you but it’s not coming out right :o/