Oh, very nice job! The 5 steps of grief, I take it.. I think this one is captured beautifully. :)

I feel bruised and battered, so effectively done on that front.
Nitpicking: chocked = choked

Thanks guys!!

Elsha: yes, it is the five steps of griefe. :)

and THX: haha thank you. I am completly horrible at editing my own work. I appreciate it!!!