I like the last paragraph especially, made me laugh.

Reminded me a little of that story about the disney mascot hitting someone which was in the news a while ago, wouldnt have blamed the dude if itwas this family he’d been posing wtih

Nice slice of life piece, very real

It’s like a modern day version of The Twits haha.

lol this part is good too. I like how Jimmy either wears a Hawaiian shirt all the time, or he just happens to be wearing the same one as in the picture. How long after the first story does this part take place?

Good spot on the Hawaiian shirt reference, I think he favours the style personally – as I intended for this to be a memory of the occasion quite a while later… Glad you liked it!

the pizza sauce flying from his chins, ew. Great description, I can’t believe the 180 you wrote in such a short space!

As an overweight man who loves Hawaiian shirts and pizza, I reluctantly acknowledge this as brilliant and the most seamless execution of the challenge elements. Nice work!

I’m glad this won the challenge. Definitely one of my favorites :)

This reminds me of my step-mum and her ex-husband. I hate them both and this just makes me hate them even more, but at the same time I love it. :)