This is so good :) I hoped someone was sequel because I wrote the orginal and then didn’t really know where to take it, you’ve done this really well! A small pointer – don’t overuse ellipses, you could probably get rid of both sets and replace with hyphens or commas… If you’re keen on them though, at least capitalise after?

Other than that, a really lovely continuation, perhaps we could take this somewhere now! MH

This is really good stuff, V. Should be an apostrophe before the “s” if the “mans” is possessive, and dripfeeding should maybe be hyphenated, and like MH suggested you could maybe avoid using ellipsis (that sentence is a bit clunky anyway), but I think this a great sequel and a great story on its own merits.

Even bitchier than she was originally, argh. Clever title too!

very glad you like it mostly!

and well caught ed I’ll change those bits

Also ed I’ll be offended if you don’t sequel it yourself! add to it already.