uh,oh, this is a start. I hope there is more to come?

Ooh, the knife twists. Nice set-up. Not sure if you intended the little moral dilemma or not, but I like it, real classic storytelling stuff if you ask me. Fun, cute, and very real-feeling story.

Definitely a great second installment

can’t wait to read more.

This is getting good. I love the way you present the characters, and the part where Joe and Julie share that tiny moment is very cute yet realistic.