Comments on A cliff Hanger. by Marli

Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

nice take on the other side of the relationship.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

nice take on the other side of the relationship.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
THX 0477

Weird and eerie in a fatalistic destiny sort of way. Not sure I quite followed her reaction entirely, but I think I’m close. Overall does a good job of continuing the hopeless, tragic feel of the previous one.
Nitpick: hugh = huge?
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Abstract

I hadn’t expected a take on the other side of the relationship. I like it!
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Marli

Glad you like it Abstract. Its always curious to push the boundaries. It works or it doesn’t.
@ THX. thanks for your comments. I agree with the huge. I didn’t even notice.lol.@ pyropunk. Thank you.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
ElshaHawk (LoA)

I like the perspective change. :) The odd hole is intriguing as well.. so if he finds out she is gone, then will he be more depressed?
- Posted about 10 years ago.