This is a combo of
http://ficly.com/stories/11
&
http://ficly.com/stories/111.

It didn’t turn out as consise as I would have liked but I’m proud of some specifics in it. Enjoy! :)

Ah, a combo attempt. I didn’t figure it for a combo, as it all worked together so nicely. Very noir through and through.
Nitpicking: light should be lit?

I very much agree with THX’s comment. Well done.

Mmm. The rules of the challenge were that it has to be a crossover between the Ficlet and the Ficly with the same number, though.

Good job with the combo, though.