Lovely description of a very silly twist on a classic – excellent!

That was crazy! I really love the twist on Moby Dick, since it was already a freakish white whale to begin with. Awesome dramatic descriptions, gross but felt necessary and appropriate to get across that it’s a zombie whale…as crazy as that is.
Ooh, have you seen the movie ‘Slither’? It’s got a zombie dear, for what it’s worth.

Thanks, guys!

When I saw the name of this challenge, substituting “Morbid” for “Moby” is what immediately jumped to my mind.

@THX – No, I have not. I must check it out now.

I enjoyed this. The descriptions of the zombie whale were beautifully grotesque

Great job. I was thrusted into the story. :)

I liked it alot. Almost felt like Melville too, especially the particular class of vocabulary used.

Morbid Dick was a cheap pun though. I liked it in the title, but in the story it felt a little corny.

good work on the gross factor. made me laugh!

::grins:: fantastic descriptions that sucked me right into the story quickly, and delivered a fabulous ending. Really great writing here.