Pleasant way to start a morning. Plenty of conflict here. Makes for a promising beginning.

Ah, the joys of youth. Sounds like a start of another high school series. Couple of typos snuck (yes spell-checker that is a word!) in though. underneathe→underneath, skinney→skinny

Very nice introduction to the characters, and a good setup for a long line of stories…

One minor nitpick – "here he comes he’ll make it better.” doesn’t read smoothly – maybe something like ‘here he comes, he’ll make it better’, or ‘here comes someone who’ll make it all better.’ ?

Promising. They sound like an interesting couple.

uh uh oh. Looks like she is noticing she is different from the smart prep set. mmmm

trust me these two are boring especially the guy total loser…haha jk