I like the idea of an angelic “people-song.” I have a personal dislike of angels as anything less than metaphysical creatures, but I still kinda like what you did here.
water is the most powerful substance, it even dissolves angel magic.. :P Great flashback/explanation without it being a burden to the piece, but an addition and motive.
I’m a bit lost. Must have missed something before all this. Could also be the Benedryl and sleep deprivation (woohoo! Passing 36 hours without sleep now!).