2nd. last paragraph. Riders or bikers,who
turned his bike around.
“she lined him in her sights and fired.” may also be a better sentence structure.
Like the plot and follows well on the heel of the prequel.

Thanks Marli! I fixed that last sentence. Kinda tight on characters, I typically write to exactly 600 characters.

you are going to have to edit again. “holding there own” should be “holding their own”. excellent continuation.

Thanks Pyropunk 51! I usually catch that typo when I’m writing. It’s fixed now.