The Dark Hillbilly, I appreciate that you’ve added all these chapters to the story, and I like where you’re taking it, but do you think you could go easy on the self-sequeling? There’s a reason Ficly restricts its stories to 1024 characters: it’s a challenge to try to write something in a limited amount of space. If you simply keep going in the next story, it defeats the whole purpose.

I really dig what you’ve done here, and I’m enjoying this story, but I just have this dislike for self-sequels. (See my author page for more info).’’

Okay, ranting done now. I think this chapter was hilarious, and it brought some much-needed humor into the story.

Honestly, after about a case of beer last night I couldn’t shake the idea of two severed heads making out in a fishtank.

this is freaky and funny.

“Honestly, after about a case of beer last night I couldn’t shake the idea of two severed heads making out in a fishtank.”

That comment is almost as awesome as the chapter.