ok, the truck thing was unexpected.
I like the twist at the end, and the picture that this story paints overall. The only thing that I found a little distracting was when you described the road as “windy” I think you meant “winding.”
no! a truck! too much “good” in her life? had to go and smash her into a truck? ouch.
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)
Raegan Dauterive
ElshaHawk (LoA)