I like! I was also thinking that the “Daring rescue” could be that of another trapped angel, so we are definitely on the same page here

I was playing with the idea of having either Lou or Alba stay behind “to hold them off”

The last line draws me in with hope for a sequel :)

This is great stuff. Ridcully, Pyropunk, I’m looking forward to the rest of the story.

feel free to continue at any time.

Eish, it’s been a hectic two days. I finally added the new instalment :-)

such emotion, urgency quelled by logic, and then the attachment of the wizard’s ship. very nice!

A bit hard to follow, but still had a certain tenderness to it.