I like this, but wasn’t the bounty hunter looking for Ed Cope? You could call the Hunter “OC” short for “Othneil Charles” Marsh, and not lose to many characters.

Actually, the whole point was to make a joke about some historical information. Ed Cope was the one who mixed up the positioning of a head on some fossils. But, now the story is fucked.

I’m sorry if I ruined it DH. I didn’t catch the reference and if I had, I would have kept my mouth shut.

Ahh, you’re cool. No worries. If I hadn’t mixed the names up the story would be relevant.

Maybe you just need to switch the persons doing the talking. The concept works with Ed being the hunted instead of the hunter.

You should edit this and make a sequel! I can think of one way to make the joke you mentioned while still working with the previous…

Yes, editing is easy!