It was IN the nick of time. Just a little error. You need to read your story out loud or play it back to yourself on tape to edit constructively. Ie. there was no smash YET there was a wreck. never the less it was a good story.

so was there a wreck or not? the curb isn’t indicative of a wreck..
ominous ending! who is out to get her? is she merely hallucinating, or really in trouble?

Love the ending/

Welcome to Ficly!

Not sure if I fully understand the ending; I don’t follow how he “would get me”, and since conspiracy is one of your tag word, I’m totally unclear on the meaning.

welcome. nice start on a conspiracy. leaves a lot of things open to sequel or prequel.