Nicely done. A little dull compared to other entries. Still, you did a fine job. Kind of scary to think about, though, you know? Yikes, 40%?

Yeah, it’s certainly a bit dull compared to other challenge entries, and I leaned heavily on the hope that the reader is familiar with Heinlein’s original story. This was meant to evoke Michael’s death scene. I spent all of about 60 seconds thinking how Mike would respond to Zombies, then trying to figure out what part of the original story I could place my ficly in to get Mike’s message across. And then I remembered just how little I remember of the story, so this was the scene I chose.

Not familiar at all the with the story, but this made for a neat read. Definitely a different sort of take on the zombie thing with the religious angle. Makes me wonder how a devout Buddhist would see destroying a zombie. Hmm, interesting.

I really liked it. The idea of a religion unifiyng humans and zombies as all being god is awesome!

I remember the original story very well, so I completely grok Michaels’ fate in this.