That was romantic.

Nice stalker twist, and definately not a cliché

did he SIGN it?? she might wake and think he was some other boy. O.o
plenty of cliche-type things here ;) Still, very well executed.

hmm, i don’t see the cliches here. still, it’s entertaining and romantic.

The lips should be red as a rose, if you’re going for cliques. right now its bordering on clique. the window was a nice, non-obvious clique (Romeo and Juliet, Twilight, ect)

I like the note and the framing of the story. I think I would have liked it better in past tense, though. Present tense takes me out of it somehow.

made me think more of ghosts than of stalkers.

awww…maybe a bit too obsessive. Unless it was a ghost like Pyropunk suggested. A new twist?

awww…maybe a bit too obsessive. Unless it was a ghost like Pyropunk suggested. A new twist?

touching…and creepy. but still great! if i woke up to that next to my head i would be pretty ecstatic!

I definitely got the impression of a ghost, mainly from him floating over to her bed. I liked it, good stuff.