ah, things are getting clearer!

Superb take on it. You are right that the encounter I envisaged was far from consenting but this is a really interesting scenario finely voiced.

I salute you.

(missing “and” ahead of “called up strange passions”)

Nice turn of events leading up to the office visit.

Different take on “You show me yours and I’ll show you mine.” These days it is not unnatural to be different.

Such a twist, that he’d be attracted the male pretense outside, and still desire to see the female plumbing. This is a very dramatic and emotional piece, and adds so much to the prequel.

Congrats. Featured again. \o/

Yay! However, that feature should really be shared with you, since without your excellent original story, this one would never have come into being…

Make sure you read ethelthefrog’s story too folks!

I agree with Elsha :)
This is very well written, it definitely caught my interest and kept me interesting, which can be hard sometimes lol.

it certainly confused me. but i keep repeating, read the two stories, back and forth.