I love the rain, but for different reasons. :) Some grammar and spelling mistakes, the grammar and spelling ninjas will descend.. so quickly: “whiling away”(spelling); “cup of warm soup or something” leave out ‘or something’, we get it; (unless it helps develop your character’s voice) “washing away your worries and troubles away” you used away twice, followed by clear your mind and clear your head. Try not to repeat yourself.
Still, the rain is very very soothing. As well as soup.. ahh, I am calm. :)
@ElshaHawk: Thanks for the comments! Haha. I do miss out on a lot of grammar mistakes, it’s something I’m trying to build up on. I’ll double check when I write again. :)
Raegan Dauterive
ElshaHawk (LoA)
candyscribbles
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)