Interesting take on the closed spaces challenge. I really like it.
I don’t understand some women’s preoccupation with married men. I suppose there’s a certain naughtiness and control that one feels.

Thanks for the comment and rating, I had fun writing this one… especially since I’ve been unable to get motivated to write lately. I had a few different ideas but this one felt the most promising. Great challenge!

Part of me wants to scream about how filthy and immoral this ficly is, but it is presented so convincingly and with such flair. It’s completely believable.
Now I’m going to go hug hubby and make him feel appreciated…..

you guys (and girls) should read “The sex diaries” by Bettina Arndt. it make the reasons behind infidelity a lot clearer.

This was really amazing, sometimes I think there should be more ficlies like this, I like the sexualness (if that’s a word, if not, the “sexuality”) of it. It’s not written in a way that’s disgusting or in a way where it sounds like an instructional manual. Nicely done. :)

Wow, thank you all for the comments, it’s very encouraging!

5/5

Downright pornographic in bits, but great job on the pain and ambivalence involved with the whole affair scenario…lots of underlying stuff there conveyed for both him and her.

This is a piece that’s been in my head for a while… I feel like they both have a great story to be told but I only want to do it if I can tell it perfectly. Because, you know, realistic goals are always a good thing. Ha! Again, thank you all for the comments/ratings… it’s greatly appreciated

Descriptive and well written.

Althought when you said, put her hair on top of her head, is a bit confusing.