Loved it. Truely amazing. I loved the part about the zombie ninjas of the night club. That just made my day.

Thanks sfor entering! <3

hahahaha. cute. makes me feel like a kid again lol.

I want to hang out with this kid and I loved how you packed so much into his day!

lots of action. great stuff.

Fun Elsha. May as well get hung for a sheep as well as a lamb.

Funny.

That was funny, and for a breif second I thought the principal’s name was Mrs. Effer lol :D

Well, you know, principals have to have names easily made fun off, hossenfeffer effer feff is for effort! whatever.. lol.

lol nice initiation rite!

that’s exactly it , Science. :) Thanks everyone for your comments!

congrats on the feature!

At first I thought that Tank was an older kid (he could crush the principal), but later on it sounds like he’s really quite young (clubhouses, groups with silly names). Either way, it’s a delightful little story.

kids these days are bigger than me! I know, I substitute..

I just re-read the first sentence and realize that you meant that the golden triangle says “Mrs. Feffer” on it. The first time I read this I thought you meant that Mrs. Feffer was reading whatever it said on the triangle.

yeah that was vague, not everyone recognizes the triangular prism name tag right away.

Haha…this is really funny. As a kid I appreciate it hugely. Now I have an even large list of things to do at school wink
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lol! that is really funny. this kid is really bad. but i think he was right about it all being worth it.