definitely addicted!
Great, spot-on description. Loved the bitter but loving descriptions of the booze itself, like, “…pour my solutions out into a glass.” Awesome.
I love that you contrasted his (her?) need with the dislike of it. Very nice. The beginning was beautifully written..my only objection is that the last two sentences feel a little abrupt and choppy. Besides that, great work!
I changed my mind. I like the choppiness at the end. It’s a nice contrast…like an abrupt reality to the fantasy before.
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