I actually like this better. Though it sounds less stalker-esque. I told the same story, just in a more personal way.

couldn’t have done it better myself

and congrats on 9999

You must be right at 1024 chars? I just ask cuz of the missing final period.

You’re right, I like this sequel better than the original, it does feel more personal.

yes nirvana without a period :)

This is relevant, authentic-sounding and superbly written – brava!

Bravo! Amazingly well written. The power of addiction.

Oh please let the other party be a 15-year-old girl…

Beautifully written. Instantly transporting.

lol ethel!

I think you did a nice job of capturing the addiction/ obsession aspects.

Game on. Congrats Elsha. Well derived .

Ooooh, this was good too. O___o

Heh.

That was awesome Elsha i love how you brought the real life element into, and made the natives restless.
This was very personal compared to the first one which was more pathalogical.

Did some WoW playing for a while… There were more than a few folks I played with that got this sucked in.