Little Angel (Predator Challenge)

Avatar Author: K-Jellybean You know that moment when you realize you're in over your head? "I am steeped in blood so far, that returning would be as tedious as going ahead." ***** I missed this place. I missed posting. I can't be the user that ... Read Bio

She’s such a pretty little angel. I admire her soft curls and rosy cheeks, worshiping her perfection. Her big blue eyes are glossed with tears, but that just makes them more beautiful. She’s so small and helpless, it heats my blood to see her like this. She stands before me, stripped to nothing but her sweet flesh, her hands modestly placed over her innocence to try and hide herself from my hungry eyes.

“Don’t be afraid, sweetheart, come here,” I beckon her. She comes, with trust in her eyes. She loves me and I want to show her just how much I love her. My hands roam over her body, drinking in the milky skin and flawless shape. Nothing can compare to this. She kisses my face and my neck. She puts that little mouth where she knows I really want it.

Afterwords, I put her in her pj’s, tuck her into bed and wish her goodnight. Her mom comes home and pays me for babysitting, I smile and tell her it’s a pleasure. She asks if I’ll be back tomorrow night.

“Of course.” I can’t wait to touch my little angel again.

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  1. Avatar K-Jellybean

    I’m not a pedophile! >.< It creeps me out as much as the next person, but this was a challenge and I answered it… Please don’t bash me for it. It was really hard to be this creepy.

  2. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    perfection! This gets a gajillion pencils! And you well know I would never condone this, but it’s like a twisted good movie, where you’re cheering for the bad guy anyway.

  3. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    This has got to be the creepiest thing I have ever read. AND LIKED. Hahaha.

    You did an amazing job being such a freak.

  4. Avatar K-Jellybean

    Wow, thanks.

  5. Avatar Nymphaea Rose

    Dude, I think I like just read an article in the newspaper where this sort of thing happened around where I live O.o Good thing I was never babysat by people other than family members.

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  7. Avatar DoItForScience

    Wow, way to turn the creep knob up to 11.

  8. Avatar K-Jellybean

    Spinal tap reference, I think I love you!

  9. Avatar Horrorfan13

    Definitely creepy and definitely deserved to win!!

  10. Avatar Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

    go sophia youbig studtastic hoss mouse (that is a good thing).

  11. Avatar Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

    Holy shit.

    I’m shocked and impressed.

  12. Avatar Clotifoth

    Hurr hurr hurr, had to read it over a couple times to really capture the essence of it. Pretty nice :o

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