iCome (eyes challenge)

Avatar Author: K-Jellybean You know that moment when you realize you're in over your head? "I am steeped in blood so far, that returning would be as tedious as going ahead." ***** I missed this place. I missed posting. I can't be the user that ... Read Bio

There were times for me to tell her how much I loved her, but this wasn’t one of them. She had me completely under her spell and all she had to do was look at me that way. I had come home from work to find her sitting in my favorite chair wearing nothing but my favorite silk necktie. While her body is amazing and I could and have spent hours worshiping it, it was her eyes that made my knees go weak. It was that look, the one that screamed, “Fuck me!” that I could not resist.

Emily’s green eyes bore into mine now as my body moves against hers frantically, desperate for more of the amazing friction so that all sense of rhythm is lost. I see her body beneath mine, so perfect, I think she should never wear clothes. I raise my eyes bravely to meet her gaze and in that instant, without any of my usual control, I come hard while looking at her pleasure lidded eyes.

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  1. Avatar K-Jellybean

    What is it with me and writing about Em and me having sex?! >.< I don’t mean to do it, it just happens!!!

  2. Avatar The Silence [All By Myself] {LoA}

    ol, I’m assuming your the one with the eyes then. 0.o Good story btw. =)

  3. Avatar DoItForScience

    Excellent, that most amazing moment of sex. Yummy!

  4. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    Lesbian sex. Yum. (:

    Nice story. The power of EYES.

  5. Avatar K-Jellybean

    WHOA, I got a 5 out of 5 on a story about sex from DO IT FOR SCIENCE….. that’s pretty epic.

  6. Avatar DoItForScience

    Haha, I’m not actually that hard to please, you just gotta know how to push the buttons right ;)

  7. Avatar K-Jellybean

    Difs… you’re hard to please. Not as hard as Mr. Gabriel, who I’ve never seen give a five on anything [except his own work] but yeah. You are :P <3 I love the challenge you present me, though.

  8. Avatar kaellinn18

    Sophia, how is a five from Science unexpected? The first words in his name are “Do It.” :-)

    This story was hot.

  9. Avatar K-Jellybean

    Because Science, like me, enjoys the intricately laid erotica with details that make you salivate and aesthetics so good you swear you can feel what is being described. That, however, involves very long scenes—too long for ficly. So it’s surprising I managed to get a 5 out of him with 1024 characters of hotness.

  10. Avatar Lady Bug

    I’ve never actually seen anyone on here capture sex like that before. It was definitely Hot. If I could, I’d give it a 10! Five just doesn’t seem to do it justice =)

  11. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    I do too give 5 pencils!

    Just not all the time. It has to be amazingly well written to get a 5. I’m not that hard to please, either. Just a little picky on what. If it doesnt like catch me from begining to end then, it’s not worth a five.

    As for my work. Well, I believe I give myself the right amount of pencils. (:

  12. Avatar Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

    Oh dear, oh my, oh goodness.

    This is wonderful.

  13. Avatar Clotifoth

    ^ Agreed.

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