SuperHero Black Hole: Part V

Avatar Author: J. A. Keane J. A. Keane has spent the majority of his 19 years trying to act like a somewhat normal member of modern society, but seeing as nobody else seems to be acting normal these days (which basically makes the entire concept of... Read Bio

Now, before my story goes any further, there is one last facet of my power you must know about. And it’s the most critical part of my power.
Using me as an example, and pretending that someone else might have the same power as me, I’ll describe this as best I can:

When you have this Time Travelling ability, you set yourself in a certain Timeline—your Present. But when you travel (intentionally or not) into The Past, you’ve entered a new Timeline that runs in tandem with your Present Timeline.
With me so far?
But you must remember The Past does eventually lead into your Present. Which causes a certain problem.
If you change one thing, just one thing in your Past, and that Thing is a drastic piece of your Present, then BOOM!
Your Present Timeline vanishes.
Disappears.
Fucks off.
And it can’t come back.
Which means you’re stuck on your Past Timeline, as it has become your Present.
And that also means you must stay there if you want to get back to (what once was) your Present…

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  1. Avatar J. A. Keane

    This is last time I write a continuation of the first story. Now it’s up to YOU.
    Take it places I never dreamed of, and have a blast! =))

  2. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Ah, now I got it. I’d had a similar idea in mind, just as a daydream, a way to revisit times from my past. So, that first trip back allowed for a return because the hero didn’t change a thing, thus the timeline is preserved and available for return. Got it.

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    How does this affect the aging process, if at all?

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