Rivalry

Avatar Author: Nathaniel Payne I'm just a guy that likes to write. Mainly science fiction and a little light fantasy. I also like to play video games and spend time with my awesome family. I'm currently working on a 365 challenge! I will attempt to ... Read Bio

Donovan’s skin was boiling. Literally bubbling with the intensity of the heat. He recalled a spell from the inner folds of his mind that tapped a cold source a thousand dimensions away. He sucked in as much frigid air as he could draw in the five seconds he had before his body would burst into flame. His inner core cooled. His skin was melted, but whole.

His opponent noticed the recovery and began a new incantation. He had just enough time to finish his shield spell before a wave of force blasted him. It crashed violently against his newly-constructed protective covering. It was only a stop-gap solution; a band-aid. He needed to get on the offensive with an attack spell, but none were coming to his addled and confused mind.

The school children around the two magical gladiators watched in awe. Just moments ago, this was an ordinary bustling elementary school cafeteria. Now, two ancient wizards, trapped within the bodies of eight-year old children, were engaged in an age-old battle.

And Donovan was losing.

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  1. Avatar Mostly Harmless

    I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT!

    Really great descriptions and action storytelling here, I prefer magic when it’s written like this to when it’s ‘Harry Potter-esque’ say a word and something happens…

    I may not be able to resist sequelling this one, so much flair and potential it offers readers and co-writers alike – great job! MH :)

  2. Avatar kaellinn18

    Wow, this was pretty epic. I love the idea of ancient wizards as school children, and your description of the battle is great!

  3. Avatar Nathaniel Payne

    Thanks, guys! I appreciate the positive comments. I actually intended this as a bit of a sequel to an old Ficlets story I wrote a while back: http://ficlets.ficly.com/stories/12387 It was a fun concept that I wanted to expand on.

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