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Regaining Lost Honor

Avatar Author: Radical Yellow Duck Ok, I'm back. One heart attack, a triple CABG (Coronary Artery Bypass Graft, pronounced cabbage) and two sessions of beating my computer into submission. I am back. I'm old. Real old. I'm so old I remember when dial... Read Bio

“Rashida,” I said. “Why?”

“Because Allah calls us all to defend Islam, with our lives if need be. I sacrificed my honor, in order to further his cause. I gave my body to Michael to obtain what we needed. I allowed myself to be humiliated and abased. I dressed like a western whore, and allowed you and all the others defile me with your eyes. I sacrificed all I had, and Allah has rewarded me. He delivered into our hands the weapon that will forever bring the Shi’a apostates down. He granted me the privilege of killing my tormentors. And he will allow me to regain my honor as a holy martyr.”

“Rashida, you can’t…”

The sound of the report was quieter than I would have thought. But the impact to my gut felt like a sledge hammer blow, and I crumpled to the floor, my hands gripping my stomach.

Rashida turned and headed for the front door. As she reached it she looked back, and I could hear her say “Allahu Akbar” as she shut the door behind her.

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  1. Avatar Radical Yellow Duck

    Earlier I stated that I might be revealing too much with the nuclear part of the plot.

    This is the other location where I thought the nuclear part might be revealed. I could have kept the VX attack as the main object, and introduced the nukes here as a heightened climax.

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  2. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Who cares about nukes of VX, what’s really gripping is the personal betrayal and this poor guy’s sense of shock that she isn’t who he thought and the depths of her commitment to fanaticism. Weapons aside, i think that’s really the core fear evoked by our modern warfare, the idea that anybody could fanatic and do something really crazy, like shoot you in the gut.

  3. Avatar GreatNorthWoodsGirl

    I think where you revealed the nuclear component is the right spot for it. It heightens the tension and hits us square in our greatest fears of terrorism.

    As a religous person and as a woman, I can understand Rashida’s reasoning as to her motivations for doing this. Abhore what she is doing, but can understand why someone who had been educated with this fanatacism would do it.

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