Juliette's Plea.

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Day 5.
Juliette moaned. Her eyes were glazed over. Her skin, white and pasty. And her red hair, over the course of the week had gotten slightly dull. Never-the-less she was a striking woman.
She was bound to a white rocker; his mother’s old rocking chair. He did so enjoy it when mother had invited him into her lap to place his head upon her bosom.
Juliette’s throat was dry as she cried. She’d spotted him.
“What do you want from me?” she whimpered, “Why are you doing this?”
“I’m doing this for us, Juliette!” he smiled lovingly.
Her eyes widened with fear. He didn’t like the fear. He wanted her to love him.
“My name is Jenni…”
“It’s JULIETTE!” he screamed, spittle showering the floor, “JULIETTE, JULIETTE, JULIETTE,” he quaked with anger. Shook with rage as his eyes saw only her face and a film of white. She cowered and screamed before she was racked with sobs of anguish.
“I’m sorry,” he rushed to her side, stroking her hair, “Sorry, sorry, sorry,”
He offered her some cheese.
And he saw the love as he ate it.

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  1. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    he started feeding them.. hm twist to his twisted mind, or maybe he likes Juliette? Or maybe he has other plans..
    I love that you’ve given him ties to his mother, and we can infer that the trouble starts there. And I love that you pointed out the name changing thing again. :)

  2. Avatar The Third Robot

    Crazy people make good reads. I enjoyed this. I haven’t read any of the sequels and the fact that this story can stand out on its own is always something that stands out in a series.

  3. Avatar ALRO613 (LoA)

    Elsh: He OFFERED her the cheese to get her reaction .. but in the end, he ate it ‘for her’. :) He hasn’t strayed from his MO yet.

    Robot: Thanks for that. I appreciate the comment. Series is actually quite fun.

  4. Avatar H.S. Wift

    You should read the prequels, TR, this is a kick-ass story-chain, that has developed a minor complication. On a reviewing note, this story tans hides.

  5. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    oh i see the ‘as HE ate it’.. i read that as SHE ate it.. oops. okay I can deal with the same MO, no new twists.. :)

  6. Avatar H.S. Wift

    It’s been a while since anything happened, methinks I’ll sequel.

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